While being sweet is all well and good it's not my first instinct. With that being said. I'm going to pull from my latest release Glazier. Right now the eBook is 99 cents and the print came out. Just for clarification Berg is a horse Marie is riding.
In the same instant, I saw the guard with the machine gun turn and the one with the dirt bike edge closer, his own gun drawn. Henry turned to defend himself. I urged Berg up beside the dirt bike. Berg was so fast the man on the bike didn’t suspect a thing. I had to keep my promise to Berg. So I did what I do best, I climbed.
I maneuvered both my legs to the opposite side of Berg’s back. He maintained speed with the bike. I gripped his neck and twirled around him like a trapeze artist kicking the guard off the bike sending him sailing to the ground. I landed gracefully back in place. Henry jumped on behind me. Berg didn’t even flinch with the added weight.
Don't forget to continue on for more Sweet Sample. My teeth already hurt. And if you want to find out what happened next or before even in Glazier. Click the little link at the bottom.
Grazi~
I maneuvered both my legs to the opposite side of Berg’s back. He maintained speed with the bike. I gripped his neck and twirled around him like a trapeze artist kicking the guard off the bike sending him sailing to the ground. I landed gracefully back in place. Henry jumped on behind me. Berg didn’t even flinch with the added weight.
Don't forget to continue on for more Sweet Sample. My teeth already hurt. And if you want to find out what happened next or before even in Glazier. Click the little link at the bottom.
Grazi~
Like you said, there's plenty of action in this sample, and I see it all so clearly, I can almost 'smell it'.
ReplyDeleteWow! Great sample! Lots of action—love Berg.
ReplyDeleteThat was some riding! She was lucky the guy on the bike didn't swerve into her path.
ReplyDeleteHere's my sample: http://diannehartsocksalex.wordpress.com/sweet-saturday-samples/
@Sherry really? What's it smell like? gunpowder and horses? LOL thanks
ReplyDelete@Jennifer thanks I love Berg too.
@Dianne yeah it was some supernatural riding. Luckily for her she is a Glazier and can do it.
Great description.
ReplyDeleteLots of action! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGood action, Bri. I'm with you, sweet isn't my first instinct, either.
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Wow! I can imagine this on film -- with stunt doubles doing amazing acrobatics. Terrific scene.
ReplyDeleteOoh, an action packed sample! Nice to meet you, fellow campaigner.
ReplyDeleteLots of action! And it's nice when the girl gets to rescue the guy (unless I'm reading this wrong).
ReplyDeleteThat's how I read it, too, Patricia. She rescued Henry. Great job, Bri! It's always nice to see the good guys-or good GIRL, in this instance-win. :)
ReplyDeleteVery cool! Just stopping in from the campaign to say hi! :D
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